Christmas is Murder

Murder in the Raw

 
Phi Beta Murder
by C. S. Challinor
(Midnight Ink, $14.95, NV) ISBN 978-0-7387-1890-3
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Scottish advocate (trial lawyer) Rex Graves is concerned about his son, Campbell, who attends college in Jacksonville, Florida.  Rex goes to visit for a week, only to feel an indefinably odd atmosphere in the dorm and around campus.  People seem on edge.  Shortly after Rex’s arrival, a student is found hanged in his dorm room.  Rex is the first person on scene.  The Jacksonville police decide it’s suicide, and the boy’s grieving parents ask Rex to investigate.

The basic premise of Phi Beta Murder could have resulted in an interesting tale.  Sadly, the story is fatally flawed by apparently idiotic characters, and riddled with procedural inaccuracies.  Campus authorities have been repeatedly asked to investigate ongoing, escalating, serious problems involving drugs and a student website, but have failed to do so, for no good reason. The Jacksonville police would never declare the boy’s death a suicide, based on the evidence given. No campus medical authorities would be so irresponsible as to disclose detailed personal information to a stranger with no legal authority, based on a not-yet-received HIPAA waiver from the boy’s parents.

Rex investigates by conducting improbable interviews with people who seem all too ready to tell him everything they know.  He seems to feel fine about committing the odd felony in the name of investigation. Threaded throughout the story is Rex’s awkward personal life. He is a widower caught between an old girlfriend and a new one. The reader will pity both girlfriends; gracious, the man is inept at relationships!  The only sympathetic character in the book is Rex’s son Campbell; Rex himself is insufferable.

The end of Phi Beta Murder is especially annoying.  No police officer, no matter how inexperienced, could possibly have missed the evidence that leads to the solution; even a corrupt officer would never expect to get away with deliberately missing it.  In a story that is clearly intended to seem realistic, this can only mean that little research - or indeed, thought - went into the writing.  Don’t waste your time reading this one.

--Nancy McIntyre


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