The Altar Stone by Robert Hackman
(Goodfellow Press, $22.00, V) ISBN 1-891761-14-5
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Into every reviewer's life a little rain must fall. I know that not every book I read will be really great (or even just ordinarily great), but I've been pretty lucky lately. Unfortunately, The Altar Stone breaks that streak. Not that it's bad, it just never quite gets off the ground. It's hard to pinpoint the exact reason for this, for the raw materials are there, but the narrative lacks any real sense of drama. It is technically well written, but the prose almost feels like a textbook.

The premise of the book sounds quite interesting. A young boy, Wart, is playing in a rarities store and happens on a set of shrunken heads from Peru. On a dare, he picks one up and triggers a series of events that leaves him under the control of a being that lives parasitically in the human host. Called Phaqutl, it had been imprisoned for several hundred years in the head and is now determined to return to the home of the tribe he had ruled. Unfortunately for Phaqutl, finding himself in the U.S., he has no idea where that is.

The story skips forward some twenty years to find Arthur Tomas (the thinly disguised Wart) now a professor of archeology. He remembers nothing of his childhood. Phaqutl, sensing that a 7 year old child was useless for his quest, abandoned him for a more able host and erased much of his memory in the process. Now Arthur is part of an expedition into Peru to investigate several finds. Unfortunately, their intended site has been destroyed by robbers and the expedition has to return. By one of those coincidences out of which novels are built, Arthur discovers another set of ruins, but is unable to assemble proof of his discovery. He must return to the States and seek further help.

In the meantime, Phaqutl has inadvertently hopped to a criminal in mid action and winds up in prison. He uses his time carefully, so that when he accidentally discovers that Arthur has found Phaqutl's original home, he makes his escape. Posing as a rich benefactor, Phaqutl convinces Arthur to take him back into Peru, and the inevitable plot details ensue. There are the obligatory beautiful women as well. Millie is Arthur's smart, beautiful fellow academician, to whom he is almost engaged. In Peru Arthur finds Beba, an equally smart and beautiful Peruvian villager who also happens to be the host for Coquitla, Phaqutl's mate.

I think the reader can imagine the rest of the novel from these details. Despite what should be the basis for an interesting if not downright exciting novel, the tale as told is lackluster. The characters are stiff and unsympathetic to the point where it is hard to tell the difference between the monsters and the victims. The most exciting part of the novel other than the last few pages is when Dr. Tomas is slugged by someone who is making a pass at Millie. Only recommended for Aztec horror story addicts.

--Marc Ruby


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