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Welcome to New Faces, where we are pleased to introduce some of the new authors writing in the mystery genre. In this column, we're pleased to welcome Barry Hoffman, whose first thriller Hungry Eyes will soon be followed by a sequel.
Tell us about yourself.
I'm a native New Yorker, but after college was forced to moved to Philly
to get into the Teacher Corps (it was either teach or go to Vietnam). I've
been in Philly since 1968, though I'm still a New York guy at heart, and get
back there as often as possible. While I've got degrees from the University of
Wisconsin and Temple University, I consider myself self-taught in all that
counts -- my writing, my publishing, my editing. I learned NOTHING of this at
college. I'm divorced (been so since 1980) and have three wonderful children. I've been a teacher
for 28 years and am taking a sabbatical this year to concentrate on my writing
and publishing. After another year teaching, I'll quit and devote all my time
to writing, publishing and editing my magazine Gauntlet.
In 1990 I founded
Gauntlet magazine, the only mass-market publication devoted to censorship and
exploring the limits of free expression. I'd faced censorship and felt this
was a topic for which there wasn't a magazine that focused in on that area
exclusively. Then in 1993 I began publishing signed limiteds for collectors.
One of my first books was Robert Bloch's PSYCHO. I couldn't believe it had
never been published as a signed limited. In the midst of the project Bob
contracted cancer and passed away shortly before the book saw publication.
BUT, he did see all the components, signed tipsheets and was pleased with all
we did. At that time I decided this was my niche -- finding contemporary
"classics" and publishing special editions, with the author's input, while the
author was still alive. I've worked with Ray Bradbury, Richard Matheson, Peter
Straub and William Peter Blatty, among others. And, now I'm branching out to
newer authors like F. Paul Wilson and Poppy Z. Brite.
Amidst all of this I've been writing short fiction since the mid-eighties, and
wrote HUNGRY EYES, my first novel in 1993. Since then I've written one book
per year, due to my having to teach during the school year.
Are you coming to mystery writing from another career? And why mysteries? Are you a longtime reader of them?
I'm coming to mystery writing from teaching, as I said. However, I
dislike categorization. A prominent mystery bookstore won't carry HUNGRY EYES
because they say it's not a mystery. And, the horror writer at Amazon.com
won't review my work because it's not horror. Both are right and both are
wrong. HUNGRY EYES was reviewed in THE MYSTERY READER as a thriller. It's dark
suspense, but thriller is fine. It has elements of mystery, elements of horror
(psychological horror), suspense -- it's dark fiction.
Anyway, I write what I
do because I'm drawn to thrillers by headlines. When a teacher was killed in
Jonesboro by students, I didn't think of the teacher, but of the student the
teacher protected. What would be the impact on HER. Even though others
wouldn't blame her, subconsciously they WOULD. If not for her, their teacher
would be alive. And she might blame herself. Yet, except for a brief mention,
there was little said about her. I'm drawn to the impact of victimization on
others. How will they react? HUNGRY EYES takes the story of Katie Beers (an 11
year old held hostage by a neighbor in a bunker). My question was how would
she respond ten years later? Once I posed this to myself, I fictionalized
everything from her original kidnapping to what would transpire later. And for
the sequel, EYES OF PREY, I took Bernard Goetz, the New York subway vigilante,
and created a vigilante without the racist baggage. I like to get into
characters minds and with all they suffered, I can explore how they might
respond.
I've long admired mysteries from such writers as Dick Francis, Donald
Westlake, Andrew Vachss, John Sandford, Michael Connelley and a host of
others. I've been reading mysteries, horror and thrillers since I was a teen.
Tell us about getting your first book published.
My road to publication was a long one. My FIRST fiction were actually
plays I wrote for the school I taught at. I wrote five plays (the last on teen
runaways was a bit too much for the principal and I wasn't invited to write
another -- which is a blessing or sorts, for from then on I wrote for myself
without the constraints of having to censor myself).
I then wrote the "Great
American Horror Novel" which had great characters, a great plot, a blazing
ending (literally), but was HORRIBLY written (sentences that ran for
paragraphs and paragraphs that went on for pages). Being familiar with the
small press, I started to write short stories. Remember, I'm self taught.
There was no book that COULD teach me how to write. No courses that I would
take to help me out. There is NO one way to teach writing. There are NO rules.
Some writers use an extensive outline. Others, like Clancy, use none at all.
Who is right? Both. I was fortunate to find other writers who I corresponded
with and sent my work. What I gave and received was CONSTRUCTIVE criticism,
which is different than submitting your work to a panel where you're told
"this sucks." Slowly, by reading others and learning from those who critiqued
my work I found my "voice" and when my short stories began to get to 5000-6000
words, decided it was time to try another novel.
After finishing HUNGRY EYES I was lucky (in theory) to secure an agent, who
did nothing for me for 1 1/2 years other than tie my book up at a few
publishers. After we parted company Ed Gorman suggested I submit the book to
Don D'Auria at Leisure Books, who accepted the book and the rest is history --
it's NOW out in paperback.
Let me go back one step. As a specialty press
publisher I know a bit about publishing. Another publisher was going to
publish HUNGRY EYES as a signed limited, but became ill. He suggested I
publish the book through Gauntlet, and was kind enough to write a letter to
those on my mailing list, explaining why I was publishing the book through my
own company. It's had two print runs (1000 copies) -- not bad for a limited.
And, now with the paperback coming out, I'm hoping for additional exposure.
How did you research HUNGRY EYES?
There wasn't an awful lot of research needed for my first book. I've
always been fascinated by serial killers and read extensively on the subject.
And, as the book involves the thoughts of both an adult and an adolescent, my
years of teaching 5th-8th graders came in handy. And, in all of my books the
main characters are usually women. Why from a man? Again, the kids I came into
contact with were 10-14 years of age. At THAT age, girls have far more
personality than boys (sorry guys, but it's a fact). I was a good listener and
the kids I taught easily opened up to me, knowing I wasn't about to blab what
they told me to their parents or other teachers. For the sequel I interviewed
homicide detectives, as police procedure plays a more important role in that
book.
What authors influence you as a writer?
I'd have to say Ray Bradbury is my greatest influence -- not because of
his style, because I could NEVER write the way he does (I don't have his
talent), but his wonderful plots -- especially his early writing. His stories
about children ("The Small Assassin" The Veldt" "The Playground" to name just
a few, were WHAT I felt about children. And his view of evil in "The Burning
Man" fascinated me.
Stephen King influenced my writing of characters. I can
still recall minor characters he created that were so horribly wonderful. Poe,
Bloch, Matheson, Andrew Vachss and Stuart Woods were a few whose style
influenced me. I'm a minimalist -- heavy on character and plot, but when it
comes to setting I only explain in depth what is important. A car is a car
(with maybe a color). An apartment is often "bare" or "sparsely furnished"
because when I read a book, I skip over those elements. I want to get to the
characters and the plot. What I loved about Poe was that you created the
character in your mind. He seldom told what they looked like and often didn't
use names. And when he discussed a scene, you KNEW it would be important
later.
I was also influenced by Dean Koontz, who was able to combine genres so
wonderfully. And F. Paul Wilson was one of the first writers I read who ended
a novel on a downer. In some of his books he so politically incorrect that I
couldn't get enough of him. I feel that there are few people who are black or
white -- most people are shades of gray. Serial killers, for example, for the
most part lead what would be considered normal lives. When they are caught,
neighbors are flabbergasted. My characters are multi-layered. The protagonists
have warts and the antagonists can engender sympathy. In one of my stand alone
books (BORN BAD which I believe Leisure will publish after EYES OF PREY), I
have a truly villainous character. I let my children read all of my books and
they emphathized with her -- which is what I wanted. Yes, she is vile
and she does terrible things, but I didn't want to make her a stock character.
I wanted to bring her to life and garner some sympathy for her.
What do your kids think of having a novelist in their midst?
My kids are proud of their old man. They know I'm a bit warped in my
writing, but they seem to enjoy the characters and the plot. And, it doesn't
hurt that I add touches of my children in all my books. There are any number
of humorous incidents (and some not so humorous) that happened to them that
make their way into my books. Just ask my youngest daughter about the fish, or
a characters love of mustard (which she detests).
What's next?
I've already written two books in what I now call the EYES series (which
poses a problem in and of itself. Each of the titles of those books has to
have the word EYE(S) in the title. It can be a real pain in the ass. After the
sequel, I wrote three stand alone books, but every so often I was drawn back
to this one character from HUNGRY EYES. She's such a powerful character. I
THOUGHT and PLANNED to tell EVERYTHING about her in the two books. That's why
I liked the stand alone novels. I could create totally new characters and tell
EVERYTHING I wanted about them.
Yet, after my third stand alone book, I felt
in a bit of a rut. I wanted th change genres (or at least mix genres). I
wanted to add some supernatural, a la Koontz to the mystery/thriller. I'd done
a bit of that in my stand alone books, but I wanted to explore that area more
fully. And, the more I thought about this one character the more I felt I'd
left out something very important in her development. So, I HAD something to
say about her. And, I also had an idea for a fourth book in the series. There
are two ways I feel you can keep a series vibrant and alive. If the central
character becomes a stock figure, the series dies. One way is to focus on
another character, with the series main character playing a lesser role. I did
that in EYES OF PREY. The other way is to change genres. In the third and
fourth books of the series, there will be more of a supernatural twist.
And,
with each book in the series, new characters emerge to become part of a
"family" of mine. I can see some of these characters as leads in a book, with
the central series character playing a more subordinate role -- yet, being
such a strong character she seems to muscle her way in at the most inopportune
(or opportune) times. At the moment, I want to play with this series, but I
could easily work on another stand alone novel.
EYES OF PREY will be released
in September 1999 by Leisure, and as I said, they want to publish my first
stand alone book after, so I'm not typecast. And, the last stand alone novel I
wrote COULD have a sequel. Lastly, there's no reason why characters from my
EYES series couldn't "meet" characters of my stand alone books. They all take
place in Philly and all of my stand alone novels involve the homicide unit of
the Philadelphia police department.
How can your readers get in touch with you?
Readers can get in touch with me two ways. First, there is my website:
http://www.gauntletpress.com
The website has chapters from each of my two books, an interview that was
conducted about six months ago, as well as material about my magazine and the
other books I publish. For instance, it lists a book tour I'll be starting in
mid-October. I'm off to Colorado October 13, then off to Boston October 23, in
the Philly area all of November and then to Perdue the first weekend in
December (see any hidden agenda there?). I'll also be in New York at the
Chiller Convention Halloween weekend.
And, readers can contact me via email at gauntlet66@aol.com
On my website are various contests. I had one where readers chose the cover
for the hardcover of EYES OF PREY. And, I will be having a contest to name the
third EYES book. Starting in November, readers can suggest titles. Both the
editor at Leisure and I will whittle the ones received down to ten or so and
see which readers like the best. At some point I may have readers pose questions to one of the characters in my EYES series, and write the answers from her POV. I very much want feedback from
readers. I've told one reader that in the fourth book in the series one
character who has run his/her course may be bumped off because that allows me
to explore that character in a way I couldn't do when he/she was alive. That
person is already trying to figure out who's going to buy the farm. I enjoy
staying in touch with my readers and seeing what they like best (least) about
my work.
Thanks, Barry, and best of luck! Readers, check out our review of Hungry Eyes.
October 12, 1998
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